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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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oils in the styrofoam swirling furrowed bows of rain giggle like a little girl pig-tailed taking names in class chaos with a flip of switch-- "teacher, teacher, turn it on" catching that sweet little girl dipping ends of tales in black. "Circle yes or no." She broke the pencil, ending with no point. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Ahh..well, this is different.. I likey much.  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
this brings back gradeschool flashbacks, both bad and good what i see tho is some little blondhaired devilish boy dipping my braids into paint.... gotta love this. |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
"catching that sweet little girl dipping ends of tales in black." I see double meaning in that, hmmmmm.... It threw me back too, to primary school, a different one every three months - *brrrr* what a memory. Anyway, hugs you sexy thing you, and keep writing, and I'll keep reading, even if I can't think of anything intelligent to say!   |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"oils in the styrofoam" Those lines are what struck me...absorbing.. I hated grade school..and I hated boys.. wait..not much has changed.. Loved it Karen! Susan |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
smirking over here Karen . . . my point exactly good thing we dont use inkwells anymore eh? xxoo |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Karen...you know I'm smiling at this one. I'm loving these memories of yours...keep 'em coming.  Love you, lady...  "My friends are my estate." |
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