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Open Poetry #28

AM I?

MERCURY
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 190
Ireland

0 posted 2003-08-19 05:18 AM

The pressure forced my bones to crack,

Feeling awkward,

As if I was wearing a dirty Mack.

Crouching in a depressed side street,

I was more than a little downbeat.

Hiding from weeping souls` tears,

When I use to confront all those wild frontiers.

Surge of Flashbacks dripped in red,

My pulse reading says I’m dead.

Am I?

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-08-19 11:33 PM

I loved the darkness. I also like the part:

"My Pulse says I am dead
AM I?"

Cold hands means a warm heart

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2003-08-20 02:06 AM

Oooh, this rocks my socks.

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