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Open Poetry #28

the trees (senryu)

lucky
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since 2000-01-17

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Idaho

0 posted 2003-08-21 01:30 PM

Aspen crys,
"why am I so out of breath?"
Cedar, "fall leaves"

Birch tree
"why am I peeling away?"
Cedar "no sun block"

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

1 posted 2003-08-21 01:47 PM

Oh Dale! I LOVE this one! What a picture! I love trees, and you've just done a great thing with these words here!

Martie

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California

2 posted 2003-08-21 04:08 PM

Dale...a poem and a smile! Thanks!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-08-21 04:26 PM

Well, bless my britches! What a fun read!

Big ash tree says to baby ash tree, "Your mom is the best piece of ash in the forest!"

~ Please forgive me, for I could not help myself!

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