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Open Poetry #28
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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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0 posted 2003-08-25 03:05 PM

~ ~ ~

one should express

love

to the other as It's

not

what you believe

I

should do for you

It's

what we believe both

can

do for each other

~ ~ ~

     


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Nan
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1 posted 2003-08-25 05:20 PM

Well penned, QjQ - I did a version of this theme once... "Give & Give"... rather than "Give & Take"

I like your rendering...
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