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Temptress
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Temptress |
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ShadowRaven Member
since 2003-08-13
Posts 51 |
Come and lay beside me, Submit yourself to me – I know what is inside of you, I’ve come to set you free. Your every wish and desire, I’m here to fulfil for you – I’ll do anything you want – I’ll give my all for you. I’ll fill you with such ecstasy – You’ve never know before, I will leave you breathless – But still you’ll ask for more. And while I am pleasing you – My soul will call to yours, Willingly you’ll submit to me – You’ll be trapped within my claws. Embraced within the Darkness You’ll know you have come home – Forever with your kindred. Forever - all alone. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Ooh, powerful write, toots. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
hope you can back it all up. good words for a lucky gal |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
SSSHHHHHHHHHHHHHhhhh.... Don't look now - It RHYMES!! - and does it well....  |
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ShadowRaven Member
since 2003-08-13
Posts 51 |
teehee - of course I can back it up!! Most of my stuff rhymes - just the way it comes out I guess. Glad you liked it. |
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