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A Poet's Star |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Just beautiful in every way... Patricia |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
This is a wonderful scene, especially for triple digit temperatures. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...the fullness of the poem in so few words is stunning. Eric |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So very pretty Karilea... Much enjoyed the words and picture. ~Hugs~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
This is just gorgeous, in image and thoughts, and you knew night is my favorite time of day!!! Enjoyed to the hilt...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is totally after my heart .... and I learned a new word to use sometimes (stud ... you wouldn't guess how many meanings this has in German, but I found the right one for this "case" ... verzieren, uebersaen). Very beautiful and refreshing indeed! Love, Margherita  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*moth giddy* just look at all the alliterations.  lovely poetess K... its so hot here the snow is a welcome thought...(till it gets here) lol "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
god...breathtaking..honestly! If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ahhh Sunshinygirl, what a beautiful picture you have painted. I feel the pull of a promise.  Maree fate is not just |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Karilea, this is so beautiful. Both, the picture and the poem. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The alliteration adds a soothing element to your lovely words.  Huggums, EA |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Karilea, I can honestly say that this is the prettiest haiku that I've ever read...more please This is a keeper~ Melissa Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
lovely -- and the pome aint bad either! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
oh star light star bright watching over me tonight will you grant my wish  very good "K" enjoyed,,, |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
This is lovely, Karilea. Almost cooled me off for a minute there. Hugs, ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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