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Open Poetry #28

Stranger

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2003-09-02 02:06 AM

Ten minutes seemed like an eternity.
We were still strangers. All the same,
I loved you ardently and fervently.
I never even knew your name.

When music stopped, we kept on dancing.
You went as quickly as you came.
You took my breath with you and gasping,
I never even asked your name.

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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-09-02 02:11 AM

Wow..

The last lines
made this so..

I don't know how to describe, but it was a good feeling.

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

2 posted 2003-09-02 02:18 AM

The last lines made this breathtaking.I wrote something similar in the mature forum but with my perspective.Glad to see someone else's view on this.Well penned and beautifully done.

Crystal

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2003-09-02 06:56 AM

sometimes its better not to know their name......
go Yanks..........

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