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KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

0 posted 2003-09-03 02:02 AM

Icicled little boys
Beg from the bottom of a ring
Chrystalized teeth chatter.

You
Stare
Blankly.
Not seeing.
A thousand thin emotions tickle
The edges of your ready lips.
Never recognized
Never grasped
The words

And so

You spoke...

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l
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n
c
e

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

[This message has been edited by KoKo (09-03-2003 02:05 AM).]

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Kaoru

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Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-09-03 02:11 AM

This is simply amazing..

Really interesting and cool(literally?) write!

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

2 posted 2003-09-03 02:17 AM

Thanks Kaoru

That means alot comin from you

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-09-03 12:02 PM

--and you spoke

v
o
l
u
m
e
s

Loves 'n hugs,
EA

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

4 posted 2003-09-03 08:47 PM

Hehehe!! Thanks Ea!!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

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