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Open Poetry #28

On the Way

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-09-03 03:14 PM

set free
in raindrops,
I am reckless
and giddy,
sidetracked
by puddles
of intrigue
and self-doubt,
on the way
to sanctuary,
deep within
the ocean's
stillness

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (09-03-2003 07:37 PM).]

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2003-09-03 04:32 PM

inkedgoddess - like your thoughts...

BC

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

2 posted 2003-09-03 04:52 PM

oh, you painted some pretty vivid images with your words, and I enjoyed them all!! ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

3 posted 2003-09-03 05:22 PM

Short sweet and wonderfully done! excellent

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-09-03 07:27 PM

Michele, a lot said in a few. I liked.

Hugs

Ethel

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

5 posted 2003-09-03 07:28 PM

I like the insight here.Nicely done.
Crystal

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2003-09-03 07:29 PM

loved it

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

7 posted 2003-09-03 09:16 PM

"set free
in raindrops,
I am reckless
and giddy,
sidetracked
by puddles
of intrigue"

Yes...I love this, Michele.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"Deep inside this armor, the warrior is a child."
~Twila Paris

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