......Romantic Moments......

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Open Poetry #28

......Romantic Moments......

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-09-05 10:17 PM

A soft sultry melody fills
our ears
flickering flames dimly
glow
soft caresses touching
each body
tiny beads of moisture
dampen
our bodies go slowly
from tepid to
torrid

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2003-09-05 11:32 PM

'from tepid to torrid'--that's a trip I want to make.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2003-09-06 12:55 PM

Ditto that, P..

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2003-09-06 01:18 AM

tepid to torrid...plays a melody all it's own.

Loved the romance QJ~

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

4 posted 2003-09-06 08:40 PM

what they said

brilliant.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2003-09-06 11:56 PM

What an ending Q...
Torrid is a word that carries a pulse all it's own. Bravo! TD

lotusblossom
Junior Member

since 2003-09-04

Posts 10

6 posted 2003-09-07 12:15 PM

Wow...wonderful, sensual write.
I really enjoyed this.

-lotusblossom

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