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let me cry for you
| Open Poetry #28 |
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let me cry for you |
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rm711 Member
since 2002-11-30
Posts 131Wiltshire, England 
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Restrictions placed around me Walls without weakness Doors with locks holding strong Windows with shutters closed You block the light out But you can’t put a lock on my dreams The whole time you were hiding I knew where you were The whole time you were smiling I knew you were just keeping the tears Somewhere safe away from me But now you know I’d die before I hurt you And now from a distance You’ve started to let me know you I know you don’t trust me But I swear my world to you My dreams are yours too Just please don’t take my soul away Because even in a crowd of a thousand I always know exactly where you are How you’re feeling Why you’re hurting How to change it to make it better If you’d only let me cry for you. |
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MorninGlory Member
since 2003-08-30
Posts 175Oklahoma |
Such a soulful write, just beautiful. ~ becky |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
quote: Thank goodness! What a beautiful, tender, compassionate write!  Good to read you again, Rosie. PS, I'll be keeping this one for my library. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Because even in a crowd of a thousand I always know exactly where you are How you’re feeling Why you’re hurting How to change it to make it better Rosie, I can relate to this part of your poem very much. My Love and I feel that way about each other. He and I have that closeness and bond with each other.  Hugs  Ethel |
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