The Chaos of Shattering With Another.

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Open Poetry #28

The Chaos of Shattering With Another.

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-09-14 05:03 PM

Rough fingers intertwine.
Imagine quarters placed
on live eyes.

I kiss your lashes,
a jade, green burning
touching hands as we
share cigarettes.

Just a minute's glance,
a spark of feeling.
Having not been touched,
still sacred and beautiful.
Agreed upon what's lost all meaning..
nonexistance is a point of embrace,

nothing
has ever
held such power,
but a ghostly hand
strumming my guitar.

Velvet crushed red
carpeted streets, our only
weakness..
is sleep.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-09-14 06:23 PM

very nice write n read,,

Sublime Truth
Junior Member

since 2003-09-13

Posts 24
New Denver, B.C., Canada

2 posted 2003-09-14 06:58 PM

Your sense of stringing emotion and imagry is powerful, and enchanting, enjoyed your poem very much. Put some things in my mind in perspective. Thanks for posting.

- The Sublime

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