Through Clouds..........Choka

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Open Poetry #28

Through Clouds..........Choka

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Member Rara Avis

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0 posted 2003-09-17 09:05 PM

Through Clouds

The sun crowding in
through the whole lineup of clouds
draws a line to me
and a ring around itself;
dares any of them
to stop it from warming me,
as I fight for joy today.

Sunshine

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1 posted 2003-09-17 09:06 PM

A fight well spent
if joy comes...

we're on the same wavelength...
imagine that!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

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2 posted 2003-09-17 09:19 PM

I hope you won that fight, my friend... for no one deserves joy more. *S*

This is beautiful... may you continue to be bathed in light and warmth... even as the sun takes its break for the day. *S*

Martie

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3 posted 2003-09-17 10:35 PM

Ed...The sun set through clouds, warms the heart.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

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the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-09-17 10:55 PM

sometimes it is a fight isn't it..keep swinging ed

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (09-17-2003 10:55 PM).]

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