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Isabel (triolet)
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Isabel (triolet) |
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IndigoEve Member
since 2003-01-10
Posts 279Etched in the illusion of time 
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Sweet, sweet child for thee, a precious lullaby I can hear the seas, torrid with unbroken grief Shivering at the hands of Isabel's gray sky Sweet, sweet child for thee, a precious lullaby Your tears water a silent sleep in which to die Leave you here now, little one, in evermore relief Sweet, sweet child for thee, a precious lullaby I can hear the seas, torrid with unbroken grief For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...torrid with unbroken grief. ~*~ Indeed, we should look beyond, to know the why... Excellent! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is an excellent triolet. I love this form of poetry.  Hugs  Ethel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Indigo - this is beauty and may it be heard . . . *smile* Please may it be heard xxoo |
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