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Open Poetry #28
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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
0 posted 2003-08-07 11:17 AM

Scorched Earth,
Rebirth.
My curse,
Is worse.
All Heil the Serpentine's gift,
Giving hope another chance to lift.
Happy trails,
Love Fails.
Seems I was born in a burial gown,
The memories I cannot drown.
Scorched Earth,
Rebirth.
Everything lies in Eclipse...

I feel rain pouring down. I wait to rot away,
Live again, here forever, the spiral never ends.   Godsmack
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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2003-08-07 11:34 AM

Scorched Earth .... ah this hurts.
But two words in your powerful poem have a major role in my eyes ... Rebirth and  ... Eclipse, because Eclipse is temporary.
And out of the ashes something new will be born.
Drum-like sound. Enjoyed.
Love, Margherita
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