| Open Poetry #28 |
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Morgana Le Fay |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA
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I intoxicate the sleeping Plunge star laced dreams deep within an innocent chyld's veins The Goddess My Mother Avalon my blood Arthur's chosen I am a chylde Of the fey Cursed Bound Whilst the moon bleeds my name soul lost amongst the mist Stars crumble beneath my touch The earth trembles beneath my desire I am my own lover I am a chylde of the fey I am the daughter of the Goddess I am Morgana Le Fay If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (08-08-2003 03:23 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You rock! ~*~ I am my own lover I am a chylde of the fey I am the daughter ~*~ Oh yes! [This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-08-2003 03:24 PM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Words cannot say how good this is..I am in awe. Sandra |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I l0ved this..very..very much! insanity is not a crime |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
WOW!!I loved this. ![]() angelblueyes |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kris, you have outdone yourself, m'dear this is beauty . . . pure and driven from your pen to my eyes . . . *nodding* this is your best xxoo |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kristen~ This is absolutely LOVELY~ Breathtakingly so~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
we need a blushing smilie yanno..thank you all If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
a reverant bow |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
This poem immediately takes me back to the story "The Mists of Avalon." It could have been her who wrote it, which only means you wrote a great poem. ![]() |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
![]() There's your smilie... |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Okay so I read this and didn't reply for some reason, so I read it again... Enjoyed both times, thank you for this awesome read ![]() It's hard to grow up and watch your friends remain in the same mindset that you left them in |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Raph... Sunshine... haha thanks Rhonda... it's okie I forgive you Munda... *smiles and nods* If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (08-08-2003 09:01 PM).] |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
we have a blushing smile: We also have this one which thanks to me is probably the most used smilie at pip: ![]() insanity is not a crime |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kris, thas ok - I know I am invisible up there for the love of God LOL breathe . . . |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
wow! i don't know what else to say... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ooo, Morgana! This was absolutely stellar! ![]() ![]() EA |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Sue... I sowwies!!Ed... ![]() Linda... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh god kris! this is gorgeous! |
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garysgirl![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kris, this is absolutely beautiful. It has me speechless, and that is something rare for me. LOL It is awesome, Lady. I hope you don't mind that I'm going to keep it? ![]() Hugs ![]() Ethel |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
and queen of the nothern isles arthur |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Ethel... sweetie of course you can and thank you ![]() passing... thank you ![]() arthur... thanks for reading If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (08-09-2003 04:32 PM).] |
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