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Open Poetry #28

Push me harder

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-08-08 04:11 PM

Pushed and shoved
but seldom loved
I find myself fighting
barefist, ungloved

and to ask an old
question

what exactly does happen
when an irresistable force
meets an
unmovable object?

Come find out...

[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (08-08-2003 04:12 PM).]

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

1 posted 2003-08-08 04:14 PM

full force!?

sometimes I don't want to know the answer I'm usually found flat on my errr back...enjoyed

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2003-08-08 04:29 PM

Jason this is one cool write my friend!! Enjoyed this. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
Emily Dickinson

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-08-09 09:17 AM

hands taped just in case . . .
LOL
*smile*
Jason, you are hitting them home
one after the other . . .
xxoo

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-09-03 05:20 PM

I don't push.

But sometimes
I've been known to nudge
upwards.

LOL...very good, Jason.

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

5 posted 2003-09-03 07:45 PM

I only push when I have to.The answer ought to be a good one

Nicely penned here

Crystal

Gina Culliney
Member

since 2003-03-08

Posts 170

6 posted 2003-09-05 03:57 PM

ALL I have to say to this piece is Tweak,
Tweak, Tweak!

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

7 posted 2003-09-05 04:22 PM

When push comes to shove, I like the poetry hard and spare like this.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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