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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding 
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Dance with me to no music; hold me tight against you please. Smile for me one more time and kiss my forehead softly. Let me know it's okay; tell me you're not mad. I still blame myself, you know and I still worship the ground you walked on. I miss you |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very sweet n loving,, i'm sure your forgiven... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know how this is...but it will pass (least it did for me...or I just got older and didn't care anymore) |
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minoune Member
since 2003-08-10
Posts 87Canada |
chances are.. your already forgiven.... beautifully written... minoune |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There is no sense in placing blame, all we can do is try to understand the reasons why. Loved the way you wrote the missing here. Nice poem Skyfire~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
and I still worship the ground you walked on. I miss you Rhonda, who could resist this plea? Just beautiful!!  Hugs  Ethel |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Beautiful writing Rhonda  Andy |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
 ~Ti |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Dance with me to no music; hold me tight against you please." ~ that can feel more intense and intimate than with music... May all work out for your higher good!  Lovin' hugs, EA |
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