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Open Poetry #28

Another Twinkle

Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

0 posted 2003-08-13 08:48 AM

twined by vermillion queasiness,
profundity of disarray, its matrix—
the hapless, misbegotten daydream twinkle
made an about turn, reentered the prism
of fruition and hiccupped once
before vanishing

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..circa 2003..Copyright 2003 Spiros Zafiris
..poem archived in several other sites
..channeled; from spirit, Ram; through Spiros

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-08-13 09:24 AM

Ok, so I've read this three times.
With space in-between.
And came up with three different aspects.

If I read it a baker's dozen...

I'll be full.

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-13-2003 11:16 AM).]

Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

2 posted 2003-08-13 09:43 AM

..Sunshine../\..hi Sunshine—i'm pleased you read and commented...merely a glance at the
lifespan of a hapless daydream twinkle—i'm
always pleased to hear from you..

../\..Spiros

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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2003-08-13 02:48 PM

misbegotten daydream twinkle
made an about turn, reentered the prism

That's a nice thought!

Enjoyed your poem alot!!!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2003-08-13 02:52 PM

Whoa!!!!I could see great lights being multiplied by the prisems....one terrific read...

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

5 posted 2003-08-13 03:11 PM

..BlueSerenade.. + LeeJ../\..

..thank you for reading and commenting; i truly appreciate your kind words..

../\..Spiros

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-08-14 03:19 AM

what a way with words!

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

7 posted 2003-08-14 03:31 AM

..passing shadows../\..thanks for reading and commenting; i'm pleased you did..

../\..Spiros

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