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Two Triolets
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Two Triolets |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Two Triolets  I imagine stardust falling on me As I walk in the early morning gray An awakening that fills me with glee I imagine stardust falling on me As light peeks out from waving leaves on trees A voice begins to rise in praise of day I imagine stardust falling on me As I walk in the early morning gray ~*~ Sultry summer sun withers me away Soon swirling snow will leave layers of white While I prevail, wanting both worlds to stay Sultry summer sun withers me away I melt in a tea and lemonade day Knowing days will flow into longer nights Sultry summer sun withers me away Soon swirling snow will leave layers of white  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
YAY! Oh Karilea, these are stunning! keeping them Maree  fate is not just whose cooking smells good but which way the wind blows (Ani DiFranco) [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (08-03-2003 08:25 AM).] |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Oh my gosh! K, unbelievable work here. Seriously, lady, you are magnificent! Perhaps I shall try another triolet tonight. Had quite an interesting evening last night...in some winding hills with friends...it is so cool what my eyes see since I started writing again. Ooops, rambling here. But I know you understand. Love this...and yep, keep 'em coming! Patricia |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
So this is how a triolet is written with perfection! Love them! Chris |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, Elegant  |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I sigh in staggered wonder whilst gazing on your words. Their richness is our treasure. I sigh in staggered wonder. How effortlessly they flow as ripples in life's stream. I sigh in staggered wonder whilst gazing on your words. Marvelous. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh, Karilea, these are beautiful. You know I was finger tapping when I read the second time. LOL Oh, and I'm keeping these to study because they are so beautiful and because they are yours.  Hugs, my friend  Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...There! I just saved these to my file on fine examples of poetic formats! Lovely!  Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
These are beautiful, Karilea. Glad I stumbled across them tonight. "My friends are my estate." |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Karilea . . . you are one amazing Lady these are beautiful! Perfect! (don't remind me of the second one lol) xxoo |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Fabulous!Hugs, Marti |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Karilea, you do these very well. This is beautiful. Both, the picture and the poem. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Lyrical and full of style and wonder. You always amaze. Eric |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea...I love this form...it looks good on you! |
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