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SummerSized Triolet
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SummerSized Triolet |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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SummerSize  Summer sounds of katydids and bees Sighing a summer’s breeze through the pines A butterfly lights, a model for me Summer sounds of katydids and bees I sink to the ground to kneel on my knees To know that this moment is briefly mine Summer sounds of katydids and bees Sighing a summer’s breeze through the pines |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
K...another great triolet. Surely a sign I need to write another. Summer is surely fading, my sister...but I do indeed believe autumn has so much to hold for both of us! Patricia |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This moment is yours...and now ours. Thank you for sharing this beautifuly captured moment. Eric |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunshine - all of these little critters are sure flying around right now. They must have read this poem... BC |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Another beautiful triolet. Another please?? Thanks for sharing these, Karilea. I do believe that I've found another form that I love.  Hugs  Ethel |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
This is such a pleasur to read, combined with the images. I wish I knew how. Maggie |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I think what I love about the triolet form, is the repetition is spaced and the lines in between actually change the interpretation as an unfolding. This is a lovely example of just what I mean. Let's send this one round again, shall we?  |
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Justin Genius Member
since 2001-04-02
Posts 85 |
This beautiful, warm and shining Triolet most certainly caused a sigh to escape my big Justin mouth! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I've never heard of a Triolet?...I know them rednecks like Balladeer way down south call them "Terlots"....or outhouses though? |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
The triolet sings when done well. I like that about triolets. I should try one. It's been awhile. And a nice photo of a gold-banded skipper on blue vervain. s.a.g. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Karilea - this is beautiful! See why I love this form, it is addicting isnt it? And you write it with such style and grace Exactly as it is meant to be xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I just love summer ~sigh~ |
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