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Open Poetry #29
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Hockeychick19
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since 2002-10-29
Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA
0 posted 2003-10-21 02:45 PM

Your voice is like dream,
Could you be who I’ve been waiting for,
For so long,
My feelings for you are now very strong,
I wonder do you feel the same,
Won’t you please tell me if I’m coming on too strong,
I’ve never been so happy,
I can’t wait until the day I get to see you,
To spend time with you,
To be with you.
© Copyright 2003 Kelly Gambon - All Rights Reserved
arthur
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since 2001-08-14
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england
1 posted 2003-10-21 03:57 PM

I liked it
it is honest
so its good
arthur
Hockeychick19
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since 2002-10-29
Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA
2 posted 2003-10-21 08:18 PM

Thank you arthur, I'm glad you liked it. My boyfriend liked it too

~Kelly~

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