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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2003-10-21 04:18 PM

The Cage-In-Rattle
~*Marge Tindal*~

The cage-in-rattle
awakens the beast
who will not be quieted
lest others forget
Roaring from within
heard through pen
Who is this kitten awakened ?
Ahhh, perhaps her voice bears resemblance
to the strength of the lioness
instinctively protective~
~Roar~

*Just one of those 'find the mountain and scream' days*

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

1 posted 2003-10-21 05:16 PM

This is a true winner and it's going on my fridge! I seem to have more and more of these kind of days! Hmmmm....

Fabulous! Huggles, Marti

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2003-10-21 08:47 PM

such strength....

*s
hugs
M

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

3 posted 2003-10-21 09:03 PM

I have alot of those days, Marge.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2003-10-21 09:22 PM

Find the mountain and scream? Move over,
you have company.... Smile!!!

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

5 posted 2003-10-21 10:16 PM

Sounds like a day i had.
I like this alot.

:-)

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

6 posted 2003-10-21 10:28 PM

Hi Marge

I loved this.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

7 posted 2003-10-21 11:46 PM

Dear Marge: Well I live part way up a mountain. Does that count? I sometimes scream anyway!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2003-10-22 09:38 AM

Well, golly jeepers ... it worked !
So, okay ... I didn't find a mountain, but did find a little poetic hill ... one Cherokee yell released it all~
Honest Injun !

Thankee kind folks for bearing with me~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2003-10-22 10:48 AM

Marge
You are a wonder of write.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

10 posted 2003-10-22 10:50 AM

enjoyed much Marge~

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

11 posted 2003-10-22 11:32 AM

Aw c'mon Marge that's just your grandaughter waking up things will calm down when you hug her.....

Love the words.....

Eric

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2003-10-22 12:58 PM

yep! I can relate

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

13 posted 2003-10-22 01:07 PM

Great Poem!
Eric

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

14 posted 2003-10-22 04:57 PM

Marge,

I enjoyed this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Betty
Senior Member

since 2002-08-13

Posts 1159
Virginia

15 posted 2003-10-23 08:27 AM

I really liked this one Marge.
Betty

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

16 posted 2003-10-23 09:08 AM

The roaring of the beast! Oh do I not know it well!

~~J

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