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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox 
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bring me your bruises and your stringy hair bring me your thumbtacked arms bring me your eyelid wear bring me your thrift store t-shirts and your sloppy seams bring me your crooked smile bring me your helpless dreams bring me your slated one-acts and your slender hands bring me your dirty sneakers bring me your garage bands bring me your regrets and your refried glory because i love you out of context every page of your story i think that it's brainless to assume that making changes to your window's view will gain a new perspective. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Hey! I really liked this! Susan "if you won't let me fall for you |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Sounds like you love with all the frailties, and flaws in tow. That's a good thing. A VERY good thing.  love, Terri~  |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Mytuesdaywishes, I just had to check out your post after your response to Beware the Metronome. So you're the musician. I'm wondering what instruments you play. I'd say you're a poet, as well. The simplicity of your poem is is clean and refreshing even though the dirty tennis shoes may not be! \ Your poem touched me. Thanks for sharing. Sadelite |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
sadelite, i play bassoon and tenor sax at school and in youth orchestras and things...i play guitar, piano, harmonica, and horn on my own i think that it's brainless to assume that making changes to your window's view will gain a new perspective. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful |
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