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Open Poetry #29

Untrue Love...

Jes
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since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

0 posted 2003-10-27 05:36 AM

Once upon a time...
She was there, i did smell her
i felt her though i never meet her.

The thoughts of imagination made us go
to the unknown, to the place called ours
we were both there though i never meet her.

The place our special place went quiet, we forgot how we were, up there. We both smiled and talked though i never meet her.

We have know forgotten the smell the feeling and that we were there, things came between, and our love seemed more like a fantasy, though i never meet her.

I miss her she knows but life is life and we cant always change it, the way we wish, i will always love her, though i never meet her.

Smile

Jes

[This message has been edited by Jes (10-27-2003 06:15 AM).]

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

1 posted 2003-10-27 05:38 AM

Jes
Member

since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

2 posted 2003-10-27 07:06 AM

Smile .... Shararose

smile

Jes

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2003-10-27 08:01 AM

Very sad Jes, but very well done.

Jes
Member

since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

4 posted 2003-10-27 08:14 AM

Thanks Gentlespirit

Though i still smile

Smile

Jes

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