Yet another Inspiration from R. Frazier - Sol's Rise

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Yet another Inspiration from R. Frazier - Sol's Rise

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-11-21 11:11 PM

Sol's rise
Giving newness
To the edge of daybreak
Shines upon a poet's dreaming
Sending out to one and all, rites of light
Soon to reach its zenith on high
Gently it slips away
Tomorrow's gift
Sol's rise

The Inspiration?:

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Thank you, Robert!!

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (11-21-2003 11:13 PM).]

inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2003-11-21 11:30 PM

yes it is tomorrows gift and yesterdays conception

Robert Frazier
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2 posted 2003-11-21 11:42 PM

you warm me!

James_A_Fraser
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Out Making Anticlines

3 posted 2003-11-22 09:56 PM

Excellent! Form and message, thought and image, blended perfectly.

~~J

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