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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
I wish I knew you years ago as a girl with golden hair running through fields waving your jelly jar to capture a firefly. I wish I knew you years ago as a young woman long legged and blond straight and proud and daring. I'm glad I know you now. You are kind and classy and sexy and fun. You say you are not good at relationships.. I say relationships have not been good to you. Perhaps you kiss frogs and not princes. I wish I knew you years ago. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Dingus is on a roll! Well done sir! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
A very good poem, Sir.... and, it's good that you know her now!! Right? LOL  Hugs  Ethel |
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cuda04 Junior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 46Wisconsin,USA |
Wishes are but a waste of breath, be thankful, and it seems you are. Always look forward, never look back, dreams are much more refreshing than regrets. |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Know herI do. But for me her name is-- --well, I don't think I'll say just now, or just here |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I don't think the current description would fit... but I remember such a girl... wish she still existed. *S* This leaves me sad with what-if's... but greatly appreciating the work... well done! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Larry Such lovely imagery of the young girl who you never knew....a wistfull feeling to this poem. Enjoyed! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know what you mean...yes |
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