"Do I Love Thee too much?"

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Open Poetry #29

"Do I Love Thee too much?"

James McInerney
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since 2003-09-27

Posts 83

0 posted 2003-09-27 02:17 PM

"Do I love thee too much?"

If your love shall be my anchor,
To sit upon my heart,
Then every look upon your face,
I am punished from the start.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-09-27 03:50 PM

(big hugggssssss) Love truly shouldn't feel like an achor, for love is free-spirited and comforting and to be tied to a tether pole is no way to feel comforted! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is powerful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-09-27 08:24 PM

good thoughts ,,,

n2dmystic
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since 2003-09-27

Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception

3 posted 2003-09-28 01:56 PM

seems like the answer is... the punishment from every look on your love's face would be overwhelming. Good questioning.

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2003-09-28 02:07 PM

We shouldn't punish ourselves for loving too much, how can a person possibly measure it out and/or stop the feeling? *shrug*

Loved what you wrote here James~
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