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James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03

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Out Making Anticlines

0 posted 2003-11-24 02:38 PM

Tiny Hooks

it molds to your curves,
fastens down the front
with twelve tiny hooks

bought it for me, you say,
and midway through a kiss
I know it's true

I have four of them unfastened
before you notice....

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-11-24 02:54 PM

Clever, clever writing...
[even better thinking!]

eor
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since 2002-09-26

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blues & greys

2 posted 2003-11-24 03:06 PM

lol

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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Louisiana

3 posted 2003-11-24 04:16 PM

LOL... Sounds as though she bought you the perfect present! *S*

Brad Majors

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4 posted 2003-11-24 04:18 PM

nice

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2003-11-24 05:19 PM

James~
Perfect !!!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

6 posted 2003-11-24 10:39 PM

Well, number five did get my hand smacked!

(ask me if it was worth it....go ahead, ask....)

~~J

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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Louisiana

7 posted 2003-11-25 12:16 PM

ROFL... I don't think we need to ask. *G* Your response is written in that ancient font known as "satisfied smirk." LOL

passing shadows
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displaced

8 posted 2003-11-25 12:43 PM

awesome write!

I love this!

Margot
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since 2003-10-04

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9 posted 2003-11-26 07:04 PM

Great poem brought a smile

Margot

alan6501
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10 posted 2004-01-05 08:55 PM

great stuff. funny and clever

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside

11 posted 2004-01-05 08:59 PM

Onward James~

wickedbeautifulpoetry
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since 2004-01-03

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Indiana, USA

12 posted 2004-01-05 09:01 PM

Great poem...
Subtle brilliance.

-katie-

Martie

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13 posted 2004-01-07 01:27 PM

I must have been away when you first posted this....verra cute, James Fraser!

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

14 posted 2004-01-07 02:47 PM

LOL like crazy @ Suthern's reply !!!

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

15 posted 2004-01-07 03:13 PM

Me too -- got me the perfect present but then wouldn't let me unwrap it!

~~J

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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16 posted 2004-01-09 04:03 AM

Hmmmmmm/////smooth writing!

passing shadows
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displaced

17 posted 2004-01-09 04:59 AM

wow! I remember this...glad it came back around

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