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the ant
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since 2003-11-30

Posts 18
ca, usa

0 posted 2003-12-13 02:34 AM

The atmosphere clear
and air was wet
Thick swim
that day they met

Time stood still
Shining down brilliance
filling my ears
I could hardly bare this

My eyes were burning
my mouth dry, red
Holding my arms
chased by fear

I fell from that dream
into a fire
it filled my body
with passionate desire

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Member Rara Avis

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In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2003-12-14 12:57 PM

beautiful, I can really sense the passion in this, nice work...

Lauren~

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passing shadows
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displaced

2 posted 2003-12-14 01:00 PM

wow! that's cool!

SuperGlueRyan
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since 2003-06-16

Posts 45
Possum Kingdom

3 posted 2003-12-14 01:14 PM

Well done, Capt. Ant!

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desert flower looking for rain

4 posted 2003-12-14 01:59 PM

loved how much
i could feel this.

snow

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if my soul has fallen away?"
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