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Open Poetry #30

Lonely Nights In Hong Kong

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-12-14 08:18 PM

Lonely Nights
In Hong Kong

I've been hurt
one too many times
and all this pain
and suffering
is messing up
my mind.

JamesLee
December14
2003

Estel
Junior Member

since 2003-12-10

Posts 22

1 posted 2003-12-14 09:02 PM

Short and sweet, with an incredibly intriguing title. I really liked this poem.

Great job!

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

2 posted 2003-12-14 09:03 PM

Ahhhh, James...

No more Fiona?

You will heal...I promise. Thank you for sharing.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2003-12-15 05:32 PM

Thank you Estel and jaicie for the nice responses.
Fiona is nice but I don't feel like her heart is in the right place...I suppose it is for her...but not for me...James

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

4 posted 2003-12-15 10:57 PM

always like that, isn't it?
*sigh*
short and honest.
well done

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2004-01-26 06:43 PM

Thank you GG for the nice response...James

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