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Open Poetry #30
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Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
0 posted 2003-12-15 01:54 AM

Hid behind himself
his angry scars betray him
fear to shoot his gun

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ice
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1 posted 2003-12-15 04:54 PM

Well done, and timely...I like poems about current events....thank you for sharing this one..

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2 posted 2003-12-16 03:01 AM

caught in his own trap? good write
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