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Open Poetry #30

drawn blood

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

0 posted 2003-12-15 04:15 PM

drawn blood

Edges draw blood, I know
and we all have edges
sharp or ragged
and we each cause each
other to bleed

but please
have you not left enough scars?
can you not see them?

© 121503

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2003-12-15 05:16 PM

I agree....we all could stand to be a little bit more considerate of each other.

~sky

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2003-12-15 05:35 PM

I have been sanding my rough edges...

*s
M

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2003-12-15 09:36 PM

GADS.....powerful, powerful, right to the heart.....Well done !!

Lauren~

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