| Open Poetry #30 |
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Midnight at Leavenworth... |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
In silhouette Death’s pirouette Against a faceless moon As crimson stains A feathered breast Impaled: enjailed On barbed and razored tenacles Atop stone walls Impassed in pernumbras By concertina's caste. [This message has been edited by Tim (12-18-2003 11:48 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sir... the image of the razor-sharp wire is vivid in this write. My former employer visited this site... did some research wrote an article... you may remember the Birdman of Alcatraz. He lived here, too... |
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garysgirl![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
The ones in places such as this, lead a very lonely and forgotten existence..... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Couldn't stand to see this fall off the roster without a second go 'round. It was just too good. |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
enchanting! your words taste like great wine! |
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