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Open Poetry #30

Reflection - short one

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

0 posted 2003-12-20 01:30 PM

Why
can't I see
my reflection
when
I look
into your eyes

[This message has been edited by zenny (12-20-2003 01:30 PM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-12-20 01:32 PM

WOW!! This one just hits you! Well done!
And...perhaps it's because you are looking into the soul of the other person?
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Let peace begin with me...

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-12-20 01:47 PM

hmmmm?

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

3 posted 2003-12-21 02:45 AM

Wow, Kelly...

The intensity in these few words is incredible. Thank you for sharing it.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Jes
Member

since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

4 posted 2003-12-21 06:11 AM

This one is great, smile but im sure if you dont see yaself it can only mean that you mean more then a mirror to this person, and as another said ya probably looking into the soul and heart.

Smile

Jes

borgeN
New Member

since 2003-12-21

Posts 9
Norway

5 posted 2003-12-21 07:58 AM

very good - says a lot

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