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Open Poetry #30

unlucky me

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2003-12-21 12:27 PM

An unlucky Me,
wandering,
In the land of the free.

Why do I,
stand silently,
waiting for a cry.

An unlucky me,
babbling endlessly,
a waste of purity.

Love,
xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
Graduation : January 29th 2004

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

1 posted 2003-12-21 12:29 PM

Ah,Kellie. I like this... Nice and short, yet it was very good and to the point. Thanks for posting.

- C.K. Natland -

Nobody Is Perfect Until You Fall In Love With Them.

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

2 posted 2003-12-21 12:36 PM

sad to hear that there is a waste of purity...enjoyed the simple truth behind it though

Daniel van Vliet
Member

since 2001-08-31

Posts 80

3 posted 2003-12-22 05:21 PM

.... beautifully raw! I understand this feeling, what a great write.... never stop writing, just stop thinking... take care!

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2003-12-22 08:45 PM

Wonderful expression, Kellie.

"When your life is tossed and turning
And you are on the raging sea I'll come and pull you from the water Then you will know that you are free" - MWS

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

5 posted 2003-12-23 09:45 AM

Kelli,

i really felt this! so sad, yet I understood
what you were saying--in some ways I can
relate too. Hugs to you.

Happy Holidays,
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

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