How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Sanctuary Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives

A home without a wall,
Our haven without ends,
A circle we all call
Our Family of Friends!

navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #30 » Closed Eyes.
Open Poetry #30
Post A Reply Post New Topic Closed Eyes. Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Daniel van Vliet
Member
since 2001-08-31
Posts 80
0 posted 2003-12-22 04:54 PM


Closed Eyes.

You crept through my dribble,
danced upon my ire’s
fell into my heart
and drown in my love.

Gasping for shadows,
you pulled the plug
swirling, and raping
I shrieked in panic!

Dilapidated,
I consoled my eyes.
If I open them again,
I will loose you forever.
© Copyright 2003 Daniel van Vliet - All Rights Reserved
Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
1 posted 2003-12-22 08:54 PM

A sad, but good write, Daniel.

"When your life is tossed and turning
And you are on the raging sea I'll come and pull you from the water Then you will know that you are free" - MWS
wintertao
Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL
2 posted 2003-12-22 11:12 PM

very nice
Daniel van Vliet
Member
since 2001-08-31
Posts 80
3 posted 2003-12-23 04:25 PM

Thank-you.
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #30 » Closed Eyes.

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary