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Eager to be Less... |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
I may vanish in your caress. Yet still I lean towards you. Eager to be less. Until there is only air beneath fingers. And a touch is all that's left. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Ohhh... I bow to the master! Awesome write. TD |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very beautiful, Eric..as always... Hugs,  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric...another bit of amazing! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
And that touch is Divine! Every single word is a poem here. I love you, Master Poet! Margherita  |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
A very wonderful write I am enlightened. Thank you. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Gads, Eric...you've got to quit turning heartstrings like that... sheesh... thanks! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
and what a way to go...........h |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Remarkable expression -- lucky person for whom this was written! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eric~ oh my ... my ... my ... my~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Beautiful! as always  Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooooooh Myyyyyyy Eric!! Excellent! Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Less is more... ~ARH  Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Great writing Eric. Jason |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Less of me is more of you. Loved this...it's true.. self sure does get in the way. So very true. Thanks for this beautiful sharing of your soul. Just lovely. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Eric, And you have such a beautiful touch with your words. You have mastered "more is less." I, on the other hand, still ramble with mine. So lovely and so enjoyed. Patricia |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Eric, your special love muse has been busy, gifting us with magical lines again |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Eric, You've captured my heart with this one. Beautifully breath taking write!Hugs, ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
My dearest Eric... I always vanish as your sweet words caress my heart and sing to me of love's worth...and, yes, I will eagerly continue to do so. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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