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Open Poetry #30

Haiku 3

wickedbeautifulpoetry
Member

since 2004-01-03

Posts 84
Indiana, USA

0 posted 2004-01-04 12:08 PM

Blank stares congregate
Focus on me a lost girl
Drowning in lost dreams

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-01-04 01:00 PM

nice

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

2 posted 2004-01-04 01:54 PM

We all get lost at times. Nice haiku.

~sky

Hold on, if you feel like letting go
Hold on, it gets better than you know....
~Good Charlotte

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

3 posted 2004-01-04 03:34 PM

very nice haiku

Charisma

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2004-01-04 03:55 PM

very nice
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

lovejunkie
Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 93
Indiana

5 posted 2004-01-04 05:07 PM

I dont like haikus. I'm sorry. Hang in there!

-Steph

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