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Open Poetry #30

The Song Of Angels

titch k
Member

since 2003-11-25

Posts 123

0 posted 2003-11-26 06:39 AM

I know little,
about my task in life
With twilight shadows
in my heart
And this spirit,
yearning in desire;
The song of angels,
rendering sweet succession;

For I am wearied,
mist the frost on the moon;
All our pampered paunches;
Lonliness, moonlit
sea and tears;
Which cannot summon,
in a solitary cloud;

This hollow in the heart,
roles in essence
And still, the struggle
of outpourings and distress;
My outward sense is gone;
And visions rise, less harassed,

Fetch me the key,
I put down my oar;
Only as heaven pleases
And this spirit,
yearning in desire;
The song of angels

Titch

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2003-11-26 06:46 AM

love the graphic, in both the picture and your words...breathing very visual feelings.
Enjoyed

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2003-11-26 07:29 AM

Stunning writing and lovely graphics. This had an incredible flow to it. Well done.

Sparticus
Member

since 2003-11-15

Posts 245

3 posted 2003-11-26 08:28 AM

((((((Titch)))))) You continue to grow and grow as a writer. The concepts here flow brilliantly with your message. Welcome to the PIP!

Sparticus

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa

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