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Open Poetry #30

And I Wait

Youngatheart
Member

since 2003-12-30

Posts 333

0 posted 2004-01-08 09:18 PM

Counting the days,
     the hours, the minutes
          before we are together,
               impatiently I wait.
The wild anticipation
     of seeing you builds;
          I am breathless
               and it is but an eternity.
Then you are there and
     for a fleeting moment
          you are my world
              for nothing else matters.
And as I kiss you goodbye,
the cycle begins.
You must slip into my dreams
until we meet again.

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

1 posted 2004-01-08 09:29 PM

I felt as if I closed my eyes when I met her, and when I Opened them--she was gone....Beautiful writing

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

2 posted 2004-01-09 07:06 AM

Nicely penned, Youngster. Those moments can be precious.

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2004-01-09 07:57 AM

waiting,,,,,sometimes can drive you insane,,in a good way,,,enjoyed
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

4 posted 2004-01-09 10:50 AM

Yes...nicely penned indeed.
ESP seems to be floating
amongst writers today.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2004-01-09 09:01 PM

Know this dance well...enjoyed your elucidation of such a difficult journey.
TD

tavern wench
Junior Member

since 2004-01-11

Posts 44

6 posted 2004-01-11 08:37 PM

I hope it is worth the wait. IS it?

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