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Open Poetry #30

Composure

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2003-11-26 04:54 PM

I wiped away the dirt and twine,
swept burst glass into a basket,
pulled the cobwebs from the ceiling,
eked dead petals out of corners,
crushed old wax into my palm,
mopped the mud from all the doorways,
set a light upon the room,
pronounced it done. Completed. "Poem."

Effigy
Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 486
disbelief

1 posted 2003-11-26 04:57 PM

interesting.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2003-11-26 05:24 PM

Moreso than interesting. It's my last gasp here until I get back from Calgary on Sunday. Ciao, PIPians. Happy holiday.

.m.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2003-11-26 05:28 PM

At first, I thought you was doin' voodoo!

y'are magickal tho--this I liked.

You just invented poetry.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2003-11-26 05:30 PM

enjoyed

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2003-11-26 05:46 PM

Aww. A happy Thanksgiving to you S'en. And thanks, everyone, for readin'.

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