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Volcano
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Volcano |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Incandescent molten thrills of up-worldly presence Spiralling hot ideas forced through the magma Of deep resistance A preserve of the strong hearted A desert Of overwhelming sameness Disguised in blinding colour Courage within a fear of violence Burning heat of the devils thoughts Unbelievable visions of colour Nerves strung like girders Swinging in taut Suspension of Care |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Fabulous imagery seen through your words here Dave. Thanks for sharing. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"A desert Of overwhelming sameness Disguised in blinding colour" ...uh-huh. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Unbelievable visions of colour'''' vivid images, nicely done...  Lauren~ ~*~ |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Dave...Wonderfully descriptive verse with great images that felt like a volcano bursting upon the mind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I always have to read you twice, or more...what depth! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks for your words on something that was a protest message using lies called metaphors Thanks Dave |
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