on the lines of ... naked pulp

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Open Poetry #30

on the lines of ... naked pulp

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2003-11-27 02:29 AM

[This message has been edited by Snow (11-27-2003 02:31 AM).]

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2003-11-27 09:26 AM

Snow~

this is most amazing, and the last line....perfect....you have a beautiful talent!

Happy Day
Lauren~

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-11-27 09:31 AM

Exquisite!
How beautiful this is!!
Hugs~

~ Happy Thanksgiving America! ~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2003-11-27 09:32 AM

Snow
This was no snow job. LOL Enjoyed.

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

4 posted 2003-11-27 09:45 AM

This plays wonderfully in the mind. Beautiful..

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2003-12-21 12:07 PM

This was magic! Thanks for sharing it.

christian
Member

since 2002-12-18

Posts 331

6 posted 2003-12-21 10:52 PM

flawless.

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

7 posted 2003-12-22 12:07 PM

thank you all for taking the time to read and comment.
snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

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