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Open Poetry #30

Sudden Enlightenment

Laoha
Member

since 2003-03-07

Posts 161
Nevada, USA

0 posted 2004-01-14 07:32 AM

Sudden enlightenment
of truth is
a necessity to reach
the other shore
of the ultimate happiness
that is deep inside
one's heart.

2004-1-14

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-01-14 08:22 AM

beautiful and so true, it's all there all we've got to do is open the doors and walk thru

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2004-01-14 08:24 AM

Laoha
Good thoughts, good write, good read.

Laoha
Member

since 2003-03-07

Posts 161
Nevada, USA

3 posted 2004-01-15 02:00 AM

Thanks. Very happy to see you two enjoyed reading my piece.

I have a lot to learn about the English, especially so structured to be concise and precise.

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

4 posted 2004-01-24 06:30 AM

My turn to hunt...

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

5 posted 2004-01-24 07:16 AM

You got that right! A+ on stating a hard to describe given.

McLean

Laoha
Member

since 2003-03-07

Posts 161
Nevada, USA

6 posted 2004-01-25 02:20 AM

I appreciate it.

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