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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2004-01-14 04:17 PM

TWENTY OR LESS…#180

Copyright 2004 by:MARK V SHELDON


In a candle’s safety

I order light away

and through the smoke’s fingers

I take the night of day


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1 posted 2004-01-14 04:20 PM


Excellent, Mark!
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2 posted 2004-01-14 04:30 PM

interesting juxtoposition of smoke and light against day and night...

enjoyed..
MARK V SHELDON
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3 posted 2004-01-14 07:15 PM

Thanks, .

Dichotomies, juxtapositions, paradoxes, dualities...  Isn't this life fun Ron?

-MVS

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