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Open Poetry #30
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exhale
Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada
0 posted 2004-01-15 10:12 PM

same sad story
told over and over
cry me a river..
he loves you
not me
that's fine
i'm fine
same sad story
just another version
i don't need your sympathy
i don't need your pity
i don't need you telling me
it was never meant to be
never meant to be
same sad story
told over and over
cry me a river,
it's been done...
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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2004-01-15 10:32 PM

Yep, it's the same old song,
and the perfect ending, exhale.
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2004-01-16 04:07 AM

tell it like it is
J.Samm
Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines
3 posted 2004-01-16 05:10 AM

rhythmic, i could almost hear the teardrops falling from her cheeks
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
4 posted 2004-01-16 04:20 PM

Good writing.  Kind of afraid to say more kind words here because the tone of this poem indicates to me that would be the wrong thing to do.
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