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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Maybe it is true maybe I do hide behind my words and maybe I am not so much afraid of the melting wax maybe it is the flame |
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Kristin Eve Member
since 2004-01-13
Posts 89On, Canada |
I really enjoy the style you've used with this piece... your idea is wonderful and the simplicity is a great way to bring it together. I don't think i could have written this better if i tried! (OH the TALENT in Passions! is there a book of compilations out there???) "Who you are speaks so loudly...I can hardly hear what you are saying" |
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Enotneicna Member
since 1999-06-06
Posts 340Oakland, Or, USA |
sweet and simple.......well done Words are my medicine. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 maybe, maybe not |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
the flame burns but once,,,the hot wax clings and burns longer,,,, good write Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
...or perhaps it is fear of the darkness which waits poised, always ready to return once the candle is spent...? Nice metaphors HeLen -- thought provoking. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
balance .... maybe that's the center point. excellent as always *S |
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