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Open Poetry #30

Lamenting the Snowmen

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-01-16 09:58 AM

Scattered thoughts
drift on
snow colored breezes

recycled in
childsplay, painting
this season

the snowmen
birth flowerchildren

this life without reason

the filling of spaces
as life pours
between them

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2004-01-16 10:04 AM

nicely done.

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2004-01-16 10:27 AM

recycled in
childsplay,

very cool
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

3 posted 2004-01-16 10:30 AM

there's a lot of drifting going on!

always wondered what a snowman did with all that time on his hands ...

a season well spent *S

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

4 posted 2004-01-16 02:33 PM

standstill, melt, drip away...
what else can a snowman do
seasons come and go.

~~~~~<@>~~~~~

Midday sun;
carrot and two lumps of coal-
snowman's remains.

~~~~~<@>~~~~~

~C

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2004-01-16 03:29 PM

I am keeping my backyard snowman tightly packed with fresh fallen snow.....I don't want him to leave. Love this write. Chris

"When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know
that your name is safe in their mouth." Billy - age 4

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2004-01-16 03:31 PM

This one tickled my fantasy! At the same time evoked wonderful memory of childhood play in the snow! Thanks for the picture!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2004-01-16 03:35 PM

Love this one Michele.
Much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

8 posted 2004-01-16 03:48 PM

You play with Snowmen....I'd rather build sandcastles on beach....brrrrr way to cold up north.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2004-01-16 06:14 PM

thanks for coming by

always nice to have you stop by

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