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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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reMemory Sometimes... I forget your no longer there Waiting... Uncovering your wild blue eyes Running... Your hands through your brown, shaggy hair But now... All what's left, is your memory -Juju- |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like all of this...the title the emotion... the thoughts. |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
i like the way you used brief, meaningful lines. shows a how a poet can be concise yet explicit...magic! |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
(Smile) Juju |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
I really dig the title, it's one of those very personal should be words. This is good! McLean |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
pretty cool |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thank you. |
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